Monthly Archives: December 2010

Style Part 2

What is Style?
I would have to answer that question almost verbatim with the answer I gave in the first blog. Having spent the last three months reading, studying and writing about style, I don’t think that I can define it any better or differently than I already have. Style can be anything you want it to be. Style is how we classify, determine, evaluate and make judgments about people or things. The style that we choose to represent (in person, in writing,) is a deliberate choice. It is up to us to decide whether is it authentic or not.

Post 15 – My Final Say Regarding Peer Review

I am a fan of peer review, I have been from the start. I find it kind of ironic that I can find some odd wording in someone else’s paper, but completely miss it my own. Every suggestion that I have received has been “spot on.” On this last paper, one of my reviewers pointed out that I had used the words “each other” in two consecutive short sentences and that it was redundant and sounded awful (she put it much more politely.) I went back and reread the sentences and Dang! if she wasn’t right. I don’t know how I didn’t pick up on that myself, but those are the kinds of things I need help with identifying in my own papers because they seem to slip by me. (I think that I do OK when reading others’ papers, for instance, I recently noted that a writer had used the word “very” three times in one paragraph – now there was a definite need to omit needless words!)
When we read Strunk and White and Williams guides, I noticed that there were quite a few areas that needed tweaking in my writing. It’s almost the same thing when reviewing papers. When I see the over use of needless words, it makes me more determined to try and keep them out of my own writing. So in a sense, proofing other papers has a slingshot effect in that it makes me hyper aware of what I write in my own papers.
I especially liked the star rating system that was introduced with the second review. I felt like I had specific areas of content that I was to be looking for when proofing other papers, it was a confidence booster – for me. And while receiving a poor star rating may be a little harsh, you have to respect that it is only one opinion, but it may be a very valid one, one that has probably been given only with your best interest in mind. I think a setting of 10 stars instead of just 5 may give the giver/recipient a little more breathing room.
Schools are teaching students as young as first grade to peer review, so there has to be some validity to the process. I know that it has helped me produce much better final products.